托福（TOEFL）独立写作开头四句话推荐

　　我们写作最重要的一步就是审题，因为审题关系到整个文章思路的确定，而审题准确有否最直接的体现就是文章的开篇段。

　　一般来说，开篇段落的写作可分为两大步骤：

　　第一步就是用简洁明了的句子对原题目的意思进行同义替换;

　　第二步是提出自己的观点。

　　这两大步骤细化起来可以概括为四句话：

　　第一句，采用同义替换的方式对原题目的意思进行更改，当然是“形变神不变”;

　　第二句，对题目的意思进行解释

　　第三句，提出自己的观点;

　　第四句，概括自己所提出观点的理由，引起下文。

　　下面我具体用一些客户常犯的毛病题目来解释这个“两大步，四个句子”的具体运用方法。

　　案例1：误解原意思

　　Do you agree or disagree: Because people are busy with doing so many things, they can do few things well?

　　Original：

　　Some people may hold the view that they are able to do things well even if they are busy with doing so many things simultaneously or during a given period. Although plausible at the first glance, I disagree with the statement. Depending on my own personal experience and personality, I firmly maintain that people can do few things well when they are busy with doing so many things. My arguments of this opinion are listed as follows.

　　解析：

　　文章第一句话不是对原题目意思进行解释，而是采用采取了和原意思相反的做法来进行题目诠释;第二句表明自己对误解题目的观点;第三句话对自己的观点进行近一步的解释;第四句一个过渡性的句子。开篇内容安排倒是很好，但是作者犯了误解原题目意思的错误导致后面整个文字都做了无用功。

　　改后：

　　When people are engaged in a large extent of work simultaneously, they will not be able to perform all of them perfectly. Just imagine how terrible it will be: too many jobs need to be done by the same person in a given time. Once such a picture appears in my mind, I feel dizzy. To me, it is impossible to do everything well with the limited energy and many others factors .Therefore , I agree with the statement too many things to be done at the same time cause few to be well done . The reasons are as follow.

　　Revised：

　　第一句话对原题目意思进行了很好的诠释;第二、三句话进一步解释原题目;第四句话提出自己的观点;第五句话过渡性句子引起下文。

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