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雅思写作中的小词短句

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  在多年从事雅思写作研讨的进程中,总结出来,其实操练雅思写作,就比如修炼绝世武功;而流通的言语,正如金庸笔下大理世子段誉的那一招“凌波微步”,于轻灵洒脱之中,赢得考官的喜爱。

  在操练雅思写作的时分,经常纠结于怎么把语句写得更“拽”,所以各种杂乱的“大词”和长难句轮番上阵;但是可怜的是,在他们苦思冥想怎么把语句“秀”得更美丽的一起,却往往由于语法功底不强而呈现许多过错,乃至疏忽了语句的实践表意功用,使文章难明、隐晦、过错百出。这就如同一个武功平平的莽夫,总喜爱依托蛮力制胜;殊不知,高手出招,往往是胜于无形的。

  而这样动辄“求长、求难”的写作,大概是这些年许多考生的一个一起误区!咱们总过错地以为,雅思写作用词要越“大”越好,句型要越长越杂乱越好。其实不然!一味地寻求“大、长、难”不光不能使文章增色,搞不好还会拔苗助长,特别是那些根底相对单薄的考生,“大、长、难”必须慎用!

  中国人有句古话叫“尺有所短,寸有所长”。同样地,小词、短句,有时分也会有震撼人心的力气。

  下面咱们来看《IELTS PLUS》里的一段例文:

  Avoiding pollution can be a full-time job. Try not to inhale traffic fumes; keep away from chemical plants and building-sites; wear a mask when cycling. It is enough to make you want to stay at home. But that,

  according to a growing body of scientific evidence, would also be a bad idea.

  Research shows that levels of pollutants such as hazardous gases, particulate matter and

  other chemical“nasties”are usually higher indoors than out, even in the most polluted cities.

  Since the average American spends 18 hours indoors for every hour outside, it looks as though

  many environmentalists may be attacking the wrong target.

  没有装腔作势的长难句型,没有生涩难明的杂乱词汇,通读全文,咱们感觉到的是一种天然天成的明晰和流通,这才是咱们所寻求的抱负作文,才是咱们所修炼的上乘武功。

  这样新鲜流通的言语个性,在考官范文中也举目皆是:Many people find their rewards unfair, especially when comparing these super

  salaries with those of top surgeons or research scientist, or even leading

  politicians who have the responsibility of governing the country. However,

  sports salaries are not determined by considering the contribution to society

  a person makes or the level of responsibility he or she holds. Instead,

  they reflect the public popularity of sport in general and the level of public

  support that successful stars can generate. So the notion of ‘fairness’

  is not the issue. ——(《剑桥雅思6》)

  长句(Many people find ……responsibility of governing the country.)短句(So the notion of ‘fairness’ is not the issue.)相辅相成,大词(responsibility)小词(so)交相照应,逻辑关系(comparing, however, instead)明晰明确,是考生们学习仿效的绝佳资料。

  雅思写作之“要务”在于文章的可读性,也即是让读者更明晰明晰地了解你文章的内容。而杂乱的长难句和僵硬的“大词”,势必会阻止文章言语的流通性和阅卷者思路的延续性,然后形成阅读障碍。并且,频频运用长句大词无疑增加了呈现语法过错和拼写失误的概率,然后致使失分。

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