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漂亮的雅思作文是怎么练成的

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  俗话说的话,万事最初难,那么在雅思写作上怎么把这个最初开好,也是影响整篇文章最终分数的要害一步。

  Task 1

  paraphrase the question

  关于小作文,你要做的即是改写题目,并且你只要写一句话就够了;

  Task 2

  topic + answer

  关于大作文,你只需引进主题,给出你的观念即可。你只需要写两句话

  除了在最初上下时间,小编还给我们供给了一些参阅定见,让你的文章看起来简练美丽

  防止空泛的单词和词组

  1.一些空泛的单词或词组底子不能为语句带来任何相关的或主要的信息,完全能够被删掉。

  比如:When all things areconsidered, young adults of today live more satisfying lives than those of their parents, in my opinion。

  这句话傍边的“when all things areconsidered”和“in my opinion“都显得剩余。完全能够去掉。改为:

  Young adults of today live more satisfying lives than their parents。

  2.有些空泛和繁琐的表达方式能够进行更换

  例如:Due to the fact that our grandparents were under an obligation to help their parents, they did not havethe options that young people have at this point in time。

  “due to the fact that”即是一个很典型的繁琐的表达方式的比如,能够更换,简化为下面的表达方式:

  Because our grandparents were obligated to help their parents,they did not have the options that young people have now。

  防止重复

  1.尽量防止重复使用相同的词汇。或者有的时分虽然词汇没有重复,但意思却有重复。这时分能够做一些简化的工作。

  例如下面这个比如:The farm my grandfather grew up on was large in size。

  large对一个farm来说即是size方面的large,所以in size能够去掉,改为:

  The farm my grandfather grew up on was large。

  更简练的表达方式为:

  My grandfather grew up on a large farm。

  2.有时一个词组能够用一个更简略的单词来更换

  例如:My grandfather has saidover and over again that he had to work on his parents' farm。

  这儿的over and over again就能够改为repeatedly,显得更为简练:

  My grandfather has said repeatedly that he had to work on his parents' farm。

  更多关于雅思的资讯,请访问福州雅思培训学校

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