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编者按：在雅思大作文的写作中，考生遇到的最多的一个问题就是无话可说，或者只言片语撑不起250+的大作。除了本身的阅历有限外，很大的原因是在思考和讨论一个问题时，不擅于从不同的perspective入手。一起来看看simon前考官的高论吧。英文内容搬自simon的雅思博客。

IELTS Writing Task 2: different perspectives

雅思大作文的视角写作

A good way to organise your ideas is by thinking about the topic from different perspectives or points of view.

他的观点从不同的视角和观点来思考或探讨话题是组织你的观点的一种很好的方式。

I used the 'perspectives' technique to write a paragraph about the positives of more people living alone

Here's my paragraph with the perspectives highlighted:

主体段视角写作示例1

The rise in one-person households can be seen as positive for both personal and broader economic reasons. On an individual level, people who choose to live alone may become more independent and self-reliant than those who live with family members. A young adult who lives alone, for example, will need to learn to cook, clean, pay bills and manage his or her budget, all of which are valuable life skills. From an economic perspective, the trend towards living alone will result in greater demand for housing. This is likely to benefit the construction industry, estate agents and a whole host of other companies that rely on homeowners to buy their products or services.

小编点评在探讨独居生活方式的有利面时，分别从个人层面（on an individual level）和社会经济层面（from an economic perspective）j进行讲述，从小到大，从浅入深（并均配上了例子来佐证），层次感十足。当然不要忘记了开篇时的观点句统领全段（positive for both personal and broader economic reasons），作者的用词简洁，但是毫无repetition之感。

Try writing about the negatives of the same trend, from two or three different perspectives.

他的观点尝试从正反量方面，通过不同的视角来讨论一个话题。

IELTS Writing Task 2: tourism

Do the benefits of tourism outweigh the drawbacks?

Here are some ideas. I've organised the vocabulary according to different perspectives (different ways of looking at this issue).

视角写作示例2

Positives of tourism:

1. Personal perspective: Tourism is a popular leisure activity. Tourists can relax, have fun, 'recharge their batteries', experience different customs and cultures (sight-seeing, sunbathing, visiting monuments, tasting new cuisine). Travel opens our minds. It can broaden our horizons.

2. Economic perspective: The tourism industry is vital for some countries. People rely on tourism for their income. Tourism attracts investment from governments and companies. It creates employment due to demand for goods and services (hotels, entertainment etc.). It helps to improve the standard of living.

Negatives of tourism:

1. Environmental perspective: Tourism can have a negative impact on the environment. Excessive building (roads, hotels etc.) destroys natural habitats and spoils the landscape. Tourism creates pollution and waste. It puts pressure on local resources such as food, water and energy.

2. Economic perspective: Tourism may cause a rise in the cost of living. Prices of goods and services go up. Tourists buy second homes. All of this affects local people.

3. Cultural perspective: Local traditions may be lost. Traditional jobs and skills die out (e.g. farming, fishing). Local people are forced to work in the tourist industry.

Thinking about topics from different perspectives can help you to generate better ideas. This technique isn't perfect for every topic, but it can be really useful.

小编点评其实，只要是这个话题成为了一个雅思作文题目，必然你是可以正着说有理，反着说有理，关键是你要学会在横向和纵向上去讨论一个问题。一般纵向上是指从小到大，即个人，集体，再是地区，然后到社会/国家/人类，这种不同层面上的视角。而一般横向则是示例中的那种不同领域的，如经济上的，环境上的，文化上的，政治上的，这些不同领域的视角。

以上就是环球教育雅思频道为大家带来的雅思前考官的对于雅思写作的”视角“重要性的实例解读，祝雅思写作早日学有所成，祝早日与雅思分手。

编者按：关于雅思写作时对待我们一直追崇的'difficult' language的正确态度；关于雅思写作目标6分和7分分别建议。满满的诚意，选自前雅思考官simon的博客近一周的内容，相信广大烤鸭们是能从中有所收获的。

IELTS Writing Task 2: the problem with 'difficult' language

A.雅思大作文：关于“高级”语言的问题

One of the main messages that I try to communicate in my lessons is that 'difficult' words and grammar are not the secret to a high score. You don't need to be Shakespeare to get band 7, 8 or 9!

In fact, 'difficult' language often has a negative effect on people's scores. Instead of impressing the examiner, the 'difficult' language may be unnatural, inappropriate, or just incorrect.

翻译并解读simon反复重申，高级词汇语法并不是雅思作文高分的秘诀。不是只有到了莎士比亚级别的用词水平才能拿下7分，8分乃至9分。不是说高级词汇语法用在写作上不好，问题是高回报意味着高风险。很多人的作文中的这些所谓的高级用法往往用得别扭，不当甚至错误，所以不但对拿下高分没有帮助，反而是祸害了整个文章。

Look at these examples from Sunday's lesson. I've underlined the words that I think the students hoped would impress the examiner.

看看下面2句得不偿失的炫技表达

1. If schools administered with any teachers, disorder and lawlessness would arise.

2. If uncensored commercials had been banned, the crime rate would be seized from rising.

All of the underlined 'difficult' words are either used wrongly or they seem strange in these contexts. It would be better to write the following versions:

这些词汇要么使用错误，要么与语境不搭！看看如果修改。

1. If schools were run without teachers, the behaviour of pupils would be much worse.

2. If violent commercials were banned, the crime rate would fall.

IELTS Writing Task 2: advice for different scores

B：对雅思写作不同目标分数的建议

Depending on what scores my students are aiming for, I give different advice.

If you are aiming for band 5, 5.5 or 6:

对目标是band 5, 5.5 or 6的烤鸭

You can reach band 6 with fairly 'easy' language if your essay structure is good, your ideas are relevant to the question topic, and you write at least 250 words. Look through the writing task 2 lessons on this website to learn how to write introductions, main paragraphs and conclusions, and work on writing short, simple sentences to express your ideas.

When people get band 5 or below, it is often because they don't finish their essays, they go off-topic, they have no idea about good essay structure, or they try to use 'difficult' language and therefore make lots of mistakes. For bands 5 to 6, keep your essays simple and clear.

翻译并解读想到6，只要使用相对简明的语言，合理的文章结构，观点不要跑题，字数复合要求。要学会基本的导入，主体，结论的写法，要学会尽量用简短明了的句子表达观点。

If you are aiming for band 7 or higher:

对目标是7+的烤鸭来说

First, you need to do everything that I mentioned above: you need relevant ideas, a good essay structure, and you must write at least 250 words.

But to reach the higher scores, your essays need more 'depth'. You need to explain your ideas in more detail, using a wider range of vocabulary. At this level,good essay structure is not enough, and memorised linking phrases won't help either. Your focus should be on real content.

翻译并解读首先，你需要做到上述所提到的一切，这是基础。之外，你的文章需要“深度”，你需要更详实地解释你的观点，使用更为丰富的词汇。在这个7+层面上，好的文章结构远远不够，记再多的连接词也是无济于事。你的着重点应该在于“有料”。

综上，如果把雅思写作看成是练武。那么像模板，高分词句等等一切外在的形式都是招式，而详实有见地的观点和逻辑周全的论证才是内功。祝雅思写作早日学有所成，祝早日与雅思分手。