托福作文中常见病句及改进方法

机构:广州新航道 时间:2015-08-12 点击:631

  He will get a higher salary to improve his livinglevel.

  改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.

  Their brain is still very young.

  改进: They are still immature.

  Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for betterthings.

  改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.

  They can’t analyze clearly what is right and what iswrong.

  改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.

  It will help children to form a good habit of dealingwith time.

  改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time.

  Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.

  改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He canmake ends meet with it.

  Since people are always not satisfied with theirpresent situation, they want further development.

  改进: Since people are never satisfied with their statusquo, they want further development.

  广州雅思托福英语教育培训学校整理。

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